This misunderstanding between them
influences their dialogue as they push for different goals, the
priest trying to convince Bertrande that this is the real Martin
Guerre and Bertrande feeling she is confiding in an ally who will
work with her to expose him as a fake. This creates an interesting
tension in their dialogue that draws the reader in. But then the
priest reveals his position as defending this “new” Martin, and
Lewis focuses on external detail to convey how this affects
Bertrande. She pulls her cloak closer around her because the “cold
air seemed to draw slowly through the meshes of the wool and rise
from the cold stones on which she knelt” (60). The visceral details
of the cold and the stone is meant to help the reader experience how
Bertrande feels in that moment, the harshness of her situation and
the hardness starting to build inside her as she realizes that the
world is against her.
“'You then believe him to be no
imposter?'” she asks, and the priest responds, “'Surely not'”
in a voice that is “warm, definite and uncomprehending” (60).
This complicated cluster of attributes perfectly encompasses the
priest's character; he is a well-intentioned person, confident in his
beliefs, and yet quite clueless. A large part of what makes the whole
situation of the novel so frustrating is these traits interacting
with each other, because every character thinks they are doing the
right thing and trying to help, but in so doing, they miss the truth.
Leaving the confessional, Lewis returns
to more figurative language and external details. “Slowly she got
to her feet,” Lewis writes, “and slowly made her way through the
obscurity to the doorway, pushed aside the unwieldy leather curtain,
stepped outside into the freely moving air and the more spacious
dusk, and descended the familiar steps” (60). Lewis repeats the
word “slowly” to reinforcs the sense of Bertrande's pace, and it
is mimetic in how it slows down the reader as well. She also takes
the abstract idea of the obscurity that Bertrande experiences and
physicalizes it, which creates a slightly surreal moment as one could
never actually wade through obscurity, and yet it helps the reader
feel what Bertrande is going
through. The word “unwieldy,” too, is quite purposeful as it is
the adjective that describes Bertrande's life and attitude at that
moment.
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